Guilty
When all is said and done,
Who is there to draw up the ends?
It depends.
Upon
Who was the guilty one.
Who made the mistake?
When all is said and done,
Who will rebuild, who will remake?
Who will replace what is gone,
When all is said and done?
When all is said and done,
Who is meant to make amends?
It depends
Upon
Who was the guilty one.
5 Comments:
Gifted insight. Do you see the future?
words don't eat the feelings. good poetry. How often do you write?
Hello, mmm, I have a question to make to you, sorry if my english isn't good, but Im' a chilean...I read in your profile you like Pablo Neruda, and how I can see you like poetry, why do you read Neruda's Poetry??
Thanks rf and mannoj and radio. Sakura, I'm not sure exactly what you mean. If you're making a comment on my writing style, I would not even dare to compare it to Neruda's...even though in some of my other poetry, the influence of his writing can be seen...but as I said, my writing cannot hold a candle to the beauty, imagery, the flow, or the feeling that is found in his. Thanks for reading my blog, though.
I saw your profile. You like a lot of things! Do you actually like all those things?
Wait, no, I'm not calling you a liar. It would just be cool if you actually did like all those things.
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